tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post3741601199913134564..comments2023-04-29T23:47:17.183-04:00Comments on North Carolina Narrations: FreeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05112972195028944426noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-76000773215693055122012-07-07T11:37:36.850-04:002012-07-07T11:37:36.850-04:00I miss the freedom of swimming, great take. :)I miss the freedom of swimming, great take. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-63354122355394660322012-07-06T18:32:15.712-04:002012-07-06T18:32:15.712-04:00Nice twist here. I like how you took something so...Nice twist here. I like how you took something society tends to frown on and find the positive to it. Can't judge a book by its cover, right? Great job.dontpanic2011https://www.blogger.com/profile/03748395349482914590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-17657909156035377562012-07-06T16:36:54.301-04:002012-07-06T16:36:54.301-04:00I like how you used the contrast of her discomfort...I like how you used the contrast of her discomfort on land and the ease with which she slid through the water.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-26267050854123564492012-07-06T15:08:53.548-04:002012-07-06T15:08:53.548-04:00This is exactly how I felt when I went swimming wh...This is exactly how I felt when I went swimming while I was pregnant. Free from gravity! Nice job with the prompt. Great use of contrast between Sam and the other swimmer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-9452883448824977992012-07-06T14:25:29.633-04:002012-07-06T14:25:29.633-04:00I love that freedom of swimming. And I enjoyed you...I love that freedom of swimming. And I enjoyed your contrast of the two women.Carriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-18701378886657240042012-07-06T12:20:04.576-04:002012-07-06T12:20:04.576-04:00I love that you showed that confidence comes in al...I love that you showed that confidence comes in all packages, where skin-thin-110 can fail submerged with awkward movements and self-conscious you can shine. Very well done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-49182182147771499132012-07-06T11:49:03.275-04:002012-07-06T11:49:03.275-04:00Great take on the prompt. Loved the ending. =)Great take on the prompt. Loved the ending. =)Patricia JLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582005500429122486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-14713121599705839252012-07-06T10:37:51.374-04:002012-07-06T10:37:51.374-04:00oh i really enjoyed this piece. i'm a big girl...oh i really enjoyed this piece. i'm a big girl and while i'm not a swimmer, i could totally relate to what Sam was feeling as slipping into the water.christinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02983259980848913151noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-32512080071982922012-07-06T09:07:48.857-04:002012-07-06T09:07:48.857-04:00Loved this. I'm a swimmer and I totally connec...Loved this. I'm a swimmer and I totally connected with the idea of feeling weightless in the water. Well done.Lindy Phippen Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13797304779576056899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614392109385268811.post-55571990143159544152012-07-06T02:49:28.303-04:002012-07-06T02:49:28.303-04:00Swimming makes you feel free in a blissful way! Ni...Swimming makes you feel free in a blissful way! Nice use of the prompt!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com